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                       "  Adoption of a child "

                         Is adoption  legal or not??? Adoption is a legal process by which a couple takes the responsibility to raise a child who is not biologically related to them as their own. Adoption creates a permanent legal relationship between the adoptive parents and the child. When you adopt a child, the legal rights of the real parents of the child get transferred to you. Additionally, the adopted child has the same rights as any biological child of your own. In short, the child becomes a part of your family. So, adoption is an argumentative topic and there  are some people who agree with it whereas others who protest against it .In my opinion , adoption is a noble gesture towards society.

                  On one hand ,Couples choose to adopt a baby for a variety of reasons .first, People who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own. Others who want to adopt  a child  of different sex as they already has children of the same sex. Also ,couple who has only one child ,they adopt a second  child to complete their family. In addition to that there are People who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own.  In addition to that Some couples adopt a baby out of genuine love for children whether they have their own children or not. I  agree with adoption of a child as a adoption  a child can bring untold joys and happiness to your family. Also , You can make a big difference to an orphaned child’s life. Moreover The child gets a parent, family, security, love and happiness and It is a noble gesture towards society.

                    On  the second hand ,some people are against adoption . As  they believe that adoption is often considered as banned  in society. Also, Your adopted child may want to know about real parents once he or she grows up.  Beside that the child may never reconcile to the fact that he or she was left abandoned at some point of time.  Also, there are Fear of how relatives would treat your adopted child .Adoption  causes the problem of inheritance.

                    To sum up ,  Your decision to adopt a child can indeed be one of the most rewarding experiences in your life. Nevertheless, weigh all the positive and negative aspects before you make a decision—have realistic expectations.

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Adoption of a child

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The introduction:

**Adoption is a legal process by which a couple takes the responsibility to raise a child who is not biologically related to them as their own. Adoption creates a permanent legal relationship between the adoptive parents and the child.

**Some people agree with idea of adoption .(I agree with this idea ).

**Others are against the idea of adoption.

Body (1):

-Reasons for supporting the idea of adoption of a child:

a) childless couples.

B) Couples wanting a child of the opposite sex.

c) Single adults who love children.

d) Some couples adopt a baby out of genuine love for children whether they have their own children or not.

e) People who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own.

Body(2):

Reasons for refusing the idea of adoption a child: ّّّّّّ-

A)    Adoption is often considered as a taboo (banned) in society.

B)      Your adopted child may want to know about real parents once he or she grows up.

C)     The child may never reconcile to the fact that he or she was left abandoned at some point of time.

D)    Fear whether society will accept your adopted child.

E)     Fear of how relatives would treat your adopted child.

F)      Troubling doubts as to when or whether to tell your child that he or she was adopted.

The conclusion:

·        Every child needs a family as it is the best place for any child to grow. But some children are unfortunate. They have nobody to give them care and love. This makes them feel abandoned and neglected .S o, I agree  with the idea of adoption a child as it is legal.

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"The last draft "Air pollution

                  Can you imagine life without pollution?? Every one of us needs to breathe fresh and clear air .Unfortunately , air pollution has become a terrible danger which threatens life on earth . Air pollution is an environmental problem that originates from the relation between man and his culture and natural surroundings .It is founded every where as man polluted the world with smoke ,gases ,and chemicals .All human beings need to breathe clean air to live .God creates the environment without any trace of pollution . Therefore, the nature has its own way to get rid of its wastes but when the quantity or the quality of waste materials increase its capacity. There are many causes and deadly effects of air pollution and some suggested  solutions.

                            Air pollution arises from numerous reasons in Egypt . Combustion engine exhaust such as cars ,trucks ,Jet planes , and other combustion engine vehicles cause air pollution .In addition to that factories , office building , and power generating stations burn fossil fuel which also cause air pollution . Another source of air pollution is that petroleum refineries that release hydrocarbons and various particulates . Also, there are pesticides that used to kill indoor and outdoor pests and insecticides that used to kill insects .

                                Air pollution in Egypt has  deadly effects on climate ,property ,and health. First, Air pollution changes our planet's climate . It sometimes causes  global warming to speed  up and sometimes causes global warming to slow down . The result of the increase of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is the so-called "green house effect". The carbon dioxide makes the sun ’ s heat more intensive. Secondly ,air pollution can harm buildings , monuments ,outdoor statues ,and other such structures . Acid rain dissolves stones and can create cracks in buildings .Also, air pollution affects health .It causes coughs,  burning eyes , breathing problems and even death.

                             There are some suggested solutions to solve the problem of air pollution . The public and government should stand side by side to fight the environmental air pollution .Factories aught to move away from inhabited areas .Also, we should reduce using the old, badly maintained vehicles. Government should reduce the numbers of vehicles on roads .In addition to that we should avoid the use of firecrackers. One should plant trees and strict laws should be imposed.

                             To sum up , the problem of air pollution should be ended quickly .We should end this problem quickly. One should take into consideration that the earth is a gift from God.

(Final draft (Air pollution

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

                    Can you imagine life without pollution?? Every one of us needs to breathe fresh and clear air .Unfortunately air pollution has become a terrible danger which threatens life on earth . Air pollution is an environmental problem that originates from the relation between man and his culture and natural surroundings .It is founded every where as a man polluted the world with smoke ,gases ,and chemicals .All human being need to breathe clean air to live .God creates the environment without any trace of pollution . Therefore, the nature has its own way to getting rid of its wastes but when the quantity or the quality of waste materials increase its capacity. We get pollution . There are many causes and deadly effects of air pollution and some suggested  solutions.

                            Air pollution arises from numerous reasons in Egypt . Combustion engine exhaust such as cars ,trucks ,Jet planes , and other combustion engine vehicles cause air pollution .In addition to that factories , office building , and power generating stations burn fossil fuel which also cause air pollution . Another source of air pollution is that petroleum refineries that release hydrocarbons and various particulates . Also, there are pesticides that used to kill indoor and outdoor pests and insecticides that used to kill insects . Some times ,farmers use fertilizers which used to help plants to grow causes air pollution .

                                Air pollution in Egypt has  a deadly effects on climate ,property ,and health. First, Air pollution changes our planet climate . It sometimes causes  global warming to speed  up and sometimes causes global warming to slow down . The result of the increase of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is the so-called "green house effect". The carbon dioxide makes the sun ’heat more intense. Secondly ,air pollution can harm buildings , monuments ,outdoor statues ,and other such structures .The chemicals in air pollution eat away at materials such as sandstone ,limestone , motor  , and different metals. Acid rain dissolves stones and can create cracks in buildings .Also, air pollution ’effect on health .It causes coughs,  burning eyes , breathing problems and even death.

                             There are some suggested solutions to solve the problem of air pollution . The public and government should stand side by side to fight the environmental air pollution .Factories aught to moved away from inhabited areas .Also, we should reduce using the old, badly maintained vehicles. Government should reduce the numbers of vehicles on roads .In addition to that we should avoid the use of firecrackers. One should plant trees and strict laws should be imposed.

                             To sum up , the problem of air pollution should be ended quickly .Unless we use our world wisely ,our children will not have a world to live on. One should take into consideration that the earth is a gift from God.

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"Air pollution"

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                            There is no doubt that air pollution has become a terrible danger which threatens life on earth . Air pollution is an environmental problem that originates from the relation between man and his culture and natural surroundings .It is founded every where as a man polluted the world with smoke ,gases ,and chemicals .All human being need to breathe clean air to live . God creates the environment without any trace of pollution . Therefore, the nature has its own way to getting rid of its wastes but when the quantity or the quality of waste materials surpasses its capacity. We get pollution . There are many causes and deadly effects of air pollution and some suggested  solutions.

                            On one hand ,there are a great number of pollutants   that causes air pollution in Egypt . combustion engine exhaust such as cars ,trucks ,Jet planes , and other combustion engine vehicles cause air pollution .In addition to that factories , office building , and power generating stations burn fossil fuel which also cause air pollution . Another source of air pollution is that petroleum refineries that release hydrocarbons and various particulates . Also, there are pesticides that used to kill indoor and outdoor pests and insecticides that used to kill insects . Some times ,farmers use fertilizers which used to help plants to grow causes air pollution .

                               On the second hand , air pollution in Egypt has  a dangerous effect on climate. Air pollution changes our planet climate . It sometimes causes  global warming to speed  up and sometimes causes global warming to slow down . The result of the increase of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is the so-called "green house effect". The carbon dioxide makes the sun ’heat more intense. Another effect of air pollution is on property .Air pollution can harm buildings , monuments ,outdoor statues ,and other such structures .The chemicals in air pollution eat away at materials such as sandstone ,limestone , motar, and different metals. Acid rain dissolves stones and can create cracks in buildings .Also, air pollution ’effect on health .It causes coughs,  burning eyes , breathing problems and even death.

                             There are some suggested solutions to solve the problem of air pollution . The public and government should stand side by side to fight the environmental air pollution .Factories aught to moved away from inhabited areas .Also, we should reduce using the old, badly maintained vehicles. Government should reduce the numbers of vehicles on roads .In addition to that we should avoid the use of firecrackers. One should plant trees and strict laws should be imposed.

                             Finally, the problem of air pollution should be ended quickly .Unless we use our world wisely ,our children will not have a world to live on. One should take into consideration that the earth is a gift from God.

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Air pollution

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Air pollution in Egypt.

                   

 Introduction:*

Meaning of air pollution.-

-Importance of air in our life.

Causes of air pollution (body 1)- *

a-Combustion engine exhaust .

b-Factories fumes.

c-Petroleum refineries .

d-Pesticides.

e-Radioactive fallout.

f-Fertilizers.

*Effects of air pollution(body 2):

a-air pollution 's effects on climate .

b-air pollution's effects on property .

c- air pollution 's effects on human health .

*Suggested solution for air pollution :(body 3)-

a-Reducing the number  of vehicle on the already congested roads .

b-Using minimum amount of natural gas.

c-avoiding the use of firecracker.

d-planting large numbers of trees.

e-reducing waste.

f-trying to restrict population growth.

g-imposing strict laws and penalties.

Conclusion :-**

 Finally, the problem associated with air pollution has the capabilities to disrupt life on our planet to a great extent.

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