" Adoption of a child "
Is adoption legal or not??? Adoption is a legal process by which a couple takes the responsibility to raise a child who is not biologically related to them as their own. Adoption creates a permanent legal relationship between the adoptive parents and the child. When you adopt a child, the legal rights of the real parents of the child get transferred to you. Additionally, the adopted child has the same rights as any biological child of your own. In short, the child becomes a part of your family. So, adoption is an argumentative topic and there are some people who agree with it whereas others who protest against it .In my opinion , adoption is a noble gesture towards society.
On one hand ,Couples choose to adopt a baby for a variety of reasons .first, People who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own. Others who want to adopt a child of different sex as they already has children of the same sex. Also ,couple who has only one child ,they adopt a second child to complete their family. In addition to that there are People who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own. In addition to that Some couples adopt a baby out of genuine love for children whether they have their own children or not. I agree with adoption of a child as a adoption a child can bring untold joys and happiness to your family. Also , You can make a big difference to an orphaned child’s life. Moreover The child gets a parent, family, security, love and happiness and It is a noble gesture towards society.
On the second hand ,some people are against adoption . As they believe that adoption is often considered as banned in society. Also, Your adopted child may want to know about real parents once he or she grows up. Beside that the child may never reconcile to the fact that he or she was left abandoned at some point of time. Also, there are Fear of how relatives would treat your adopted child .Adoption causes the problem of inheritance.
To sum up , Your decision to adopt a child can indeed be one of the most rewarding experiences in your life. Nevertheless, weigh all the positive and negative aspects before you make a decision—have realistic expectations.
**************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Your draft is good and your ideas are sufficient and supported.
ردحذفThere are general commnets on your essay:
Take care of capitalization
take care of pronouns.
As for the detailed comments
1. Is adoption legal or not??? (a good start)
2. So, adoption is an argumentative topic and there are some people who agree with it whereas others (who) protest against it .In my opinion , adoption is a noble gesture towards society.
3. first(capitalize), People (don’t capitalize)who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own (complete the sentence).
4. Also ,couple(s) who has(have) only one child ,they adopt a second child to complete their family. In addition to that there are People (don't capitalize) who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own (you mentioned this idea before). In addition to that Some (don't capitalize)couples adopt a baby out of genuine love for children whether they have their own children or not. I agree with adoption of a child as a adoption (a child) can bring untold joys and happiness to your family. Also , You (don't capitalize) can make a big difference to an orphaned child’s life. Moreover The (don't capitalize )child gets a parent, family, security, love and happiness and It is a noble gesture towards society.
5. . As they believe that adoption is often considered as banned in society. Also, Your(the) (don't capitalize )adopted child may want to know (about real) his real parents once he (or she) grows up. Beside that(Besides)the child may never reconcile to the fact
6. To sum up , Your (don't capitalize) decision to adopt a child can indeed be one of the most rewarding experiences in your life.
your esay is very attractive .your introduction is clear and it has a thesis statement . you shows different opinions . but you should concern in capitalization
ردحذفyour draft is excellant nad itis woderfull to add pictures to the essay .your introdution atracts the reader's attention and your opinion is very clear.
ردحذف