first draft

                    *Tourist guide *

Everyone has a dream job in his life and they do their best to achieve it. So, job is considered very important to everyone want to be successful in his own life. My dream is to be a tourist guide .I like this job to much but one should put in his consideration that any job has its pros and cons.

                   On one  hand,  I wanted to be a tourist guide for many reasons .first , I love travel and it give me the opportunity to network with  many people from different places and nationalities around the world. Secondly, I go to represent my country and I proud to share history. Also I will earn from tips not subject to tax. Thirdly I will travel freely. To top it off, I can chance to improve my communicative skills.

                On the other hand, this job has some disadvantage. I will deal with the same routine daily (speech, routes, locations).I will be away from my family, and my friends .traveling from one place to another causes pains and tired. To be a tourist guide, it needs from me to be excellent in speaking English or other language .this job need from me to have much information of all cultures to be ready to answer the questions of the tourists.

                To sum up, it is my dream job and I hope to be a good tourist guide whether it is difficult or easy. To top it of, job means life and success to me in my life.

  

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Tourist  guide

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Q1:What is the importance of job ?

Q2:What is the meaning of tourist guide ?

Q3:What are the reasons for preferring this job ?

Q4: What are the disadvantages of this job ?

Q5: How can I develop  myself to be appropriate for this job  ?

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Final draft

* *the educational system in Egypt * *

                  Do you think that education is so important?? So, why it became in such miserable state education gives us the knowledge of the world around us. It develops our awareness of life. It helps us build opinions and have points of view on everything in life. Education is important because it equips us with all what we needed to achieve our dreams. Education opens doors of good career opportunities. So, our educational system should be developed to build up a good generation for Egypt.

                    On one hand, there are a lot of problems that threaten our educational system in Egypt. The methods of teaching used in Egypt are very traditional. The teaching depends on rote learning and does not take into account new methods of teaching such as using means of technology inside the class. Also  , the increasing numbers of the student in the class can affect badly on the learning process .There anther problem is that the bad relationship between the students and their teachers that appears in using violence means against students can hurt them physically or psychologically and make them hate school and may be escape from it . In addition to that the problem of  private tutoring that make the students do not attend their schools and don not respect their teachers .Besides that classrooms are in very bad condition and the time for each period is not enough to explain the lessons .

                     On the second hand, there are a number of suggested solutions to improve and develop the educational system in Egypt. The ministry of education has a great role in providing training courses for teachers to raise their levels. There should be a stick laws and hard punishment for private tutoring. The teachers also do their best to make the material very easy and interesting by using different methods of teaching aids and modern means of technology.

                    To sum up, education is considered the future of our country .This future would be successful or miserable and this actually depends on education. Hence the education can reflect the progress of our country .so; every one should be armed with education which does not end. Finally, I can say that "education last from birth to grave".

first draft

* *the educational system in Egypt * *

                  Do you think that education is so important?? So, why it became in such miserable state education gives us the knowledge of the world around us. It develops our awareness of life. It helps us build opinions and have points of view on everything in life. Education is important because it equips us with all what we needed to achieve our dreams. Education opens doors of good career opportunities. So, our educational system should be developed to build up a good generation for Egypt.

                    On one hand, there are a lot of problems that threaten our educational system in Egypt. The methods of teaching used in Egypt are very traditional. The teaching depends on rote learning and does not take into account new methods of teaching such as using means of technology inside the class. Also  , the increasing numbers of the student in the class can affect badly on the learning process .There anther problem is that the bad relationship between the students and their teachers that appears in using violence means against students can hurt them physically or psychologically and make them hate school and may be escape from it . In addition to that the problem of  private tutoring that make the students do not attend their schools and don not respect their teachers .Besides that classrooms are in very bad condition and the time for each period is not enough to explain the lessons .

                     On the second hand, there are a number of suggested solutions to improve and develop the educational system in Egypt. The ministry of education has a great role in providing training courses for teachers to raise their levels. There should be a stick laws and hard punishment for private tutoring. The teachers also do their best to make the material very easy and interesting by using different methods of teaching aids and modern means of technology.

                    To sum up, education is considered the future of our country .This future would be successful or miserable and this actually depends on education. Hence the education can reflect the progress of our country .so; every one should be armed with education which does not end. Finally, I can say that "education last from birth to grave".

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** *The educational system in Egypt * * *

                                                                              Q1:What is the importance of the education?

   Q2: What are the advantages of the educational             system in Egypt?

   Q3: What are the disadvantages and problems of the educational system in Egypt?

   Q4: What are the possible solutions to solve this problem?

    Q5: How can we improve and develop our educational system in Egypt?

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"Adoption of a child"

                         Is adoption legal or not??? Adoption is a legal process by which a couple takes the responsibility to raise a child who is not biologically related to them as their own. Adoption creates a permanent legal relationship between the adoptive parents and the child. When you adopt a child, the legal rights of the real parents of the child get transferred to you. Additionally, the adopted child has the same rights as any biological child of your own. In short, the child becomes a part of your family. So, adoption is an argumentative topic and there are some people who agree with it whereas others protest against it .In my opinion, adoption is a noble gesture towards society.

                  On one hand, Couples choose to adopt a baby for a variety of reasons. First, people who suffer from genetic diseases. Others who want to adopt a child of different sex as they already have children of the same sex. Also, couples who have only one child, they adopt a second child to complete their family. In addition to that some couples adopt a baby out of genuine love for children whether they have their own children or not. I agree with adoption of a child can bring untold joys and happiness to your family. Also, you can make a big difference to an orphaned child’s life. Moreover the child gets a parent, family, security, love and happiness and it is a noble gesture towards society.

                    On the second hand, some people are against adoption. As they believe that adoption is often considered as banned issue in society. Also, your adopted child may want to know his real parents once he or she grows up.  Besides the child may never reconcile to the fact that he (or she) was left abandoned at some point of time.  Also, there is Fear of how relatives would treat your adopted child .Adoption causes the problem of inheritance.

                    To sum up ,  your decision to adopt a child can indeed be one of the most rewarding experiences in your life. Nevertheless, weigh all the positive and negative aspects before you make a decision—have realistic expectations.