الأربعاء، 10 نوفمبر 2010

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* *the educational system in Egypt * *

                  Do you think that education is so important?? So, why it became in such miserable state education gives us the knowledge of the world around us. It develops our awareness of life. It helps us build opinions and have points of view on everything in life. Education is important because it equips us with all what we needed to achieve our dreams. Education opens doors of good career opportunities. So, our educational system should be developed to build up a good generation for Egypt.

                    On one hand, there are a lot of problems that threaten our educational system in Egypt. The methods of teaching used in Egypt are very traditional. The teaching depends on rote learning and does not take into account new methods of teaching such as using means of technology inside the class. Also  , the increasing numbers of the student in the class can affect badly on the learning process .There anther problem is that the bad relationship between the students and their teachers that appears in using violence means against students can hurt them physically or psychologically and make them hate school and may be escape from it . In addition to that the problem of  private tutoring that make the students do not attend their schools and don not respect their teachers .Besides that classrooms are in very bad condition and the time for each period is not enough to explain the lessons .


                     On the second hand, there are a number of suggested solutions to improve and develop the educational system in Egypt. The ministry of education has a great role in providing training courses for teachers to raise their levels. There should be a stick laws and hard punishment for private tutoring. The teachers also do their best to make the material very easy and interesting by using different methods of teaching aids and modern means of technology.

                    To sum up, education is considered the future of our country .This future would be successful or miserable and this actually depends on education. Hence the education can reflect the progress of our country .so; every one should be armed with education which does not end. Finally, I can say that "education last from birth to grave".


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  1. Good essay Hoda.Your introduction is very attractive.The body is well-organized.Your pictures are very nice.

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  2. good work my sister,your essay has aclear main idea and both your introduction and your conclusion are fantastic and attractive.

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