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                    *Tourist guide *

Everyone has a dream job in his life and they do their best to achieve it. So, job is considered very important to everyone want to be successful in his own life. My dream is to be a tourist guide .I like this job to much but one should put in his consideration that any job has its pros and cons.

                   On one  hand,  I wanted to be a tourist guide for many reasons .first , I love travel and it give me the opportunity to network with  many people from different places and nationalities around the world. Secondly, I go to represent my country and I proud to share history. Also I will earn from tips not subject to tax. Thirdly I will travel freely. To top it off, I can chance to improve my communicative skills.

                On the other hand, this job has some disadvantage. I will deal with the same routine daily (speech, routes, locations).I will be away from my family, and my friends .traveling from one place to another causes pains and tired. To be a tourist guide, it needs from me to be excellent in speaking English or other language .this job need from me to have much information of all cultures to be ready to answer the questions of the tourists.

                To sum up, it is my dream job and I hope to be a good tourist guide whether it is difficult or easy. To top it of, job means life and success to me in my life.

  

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Tourist  guide

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Q1:What is the importance of job ?

Q2:What is the meaning of tourist guide ?

Q3:What are the reasons for preferring this job ?

Q4: What are the disadvantages of this job ?

Q5: How can I develop  myself to be appropriate for this job  ?

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Final draft

* *the educational system in Egypt * *

                  Do you think that education is so important?? So, why it became in such miserable state education gives us the knowledge of the world around us. It develops our awareness of life. It helps us build opinions and have points of view on everything in life. Education is important because it equips us with all what we needed to achieve our dreams. Education opens doors of good career opportunities. So, our educational system should be developed to build up a good generation for Egypt.

                    On one hand, there are a lot of problems that threaten our educational system in Egypt. The methods of teaching used in Egypt are very traditional. The teaching depends on rote learning and does not take into account new methods of teaching such as using means of technology inside the class. Also  , the increasing numbers of the student in the class can affect badly on the learning process .There anther problem is that the bad relationship between the students and their teachers that appears in using violence means against students can hurt them physically or psychologically and make them hate school and may be escape from it . In addition to that the problem of  private tutoring that make the students do not attend their schools and don not respect their teachers .Besides that classrooms are in very bad condition and the time for each period is not enough to explain the lessons .

                     On the second hand, there are a number of suggested solutions to improve and develop the educational system in Egypt. The ministry of education has a great role in providing training courses for teachers to raise their levels. There should be a stick laws and hard punishment for private tutoring. The teachers also do their best to make the material very easy and interesting by using different methods of teaching aids and modern means of technology.

                    To sum up, education is considered the future of our country .This future would be successful or miserable and this actually depends on education. Hence the education can reflect the progress of our country .so; every one should be armed with education which does not end. Finally, I can say that "education last from birth to grave".

first draft

* *the educational system in Egypt * *

                  Do you think that education is so important?? So, why it became in such miserable state education gives us the knowledge of the world around us. It develops our awareness of life. It helps us build opinions and have points of view on everything in life. Education is important because it equips us with all what we needed to achieve our dreams. Education opens doors of good career opportunities. So, our educational system should be developed to build up a good generation for Egypt.

                    On one hand, there are a lot of problems that threaten our educational system in Egypt. The methods of teaching used in Egypt are very traditional. The teaching depends on rote learning and does not take into account new methods of teaching such as using means of technology inside the class. Also  , the increasing numbers of the student in the class can affect badly on the learning process .There anther problem is that the bad relationship between the students and their teachers that appears in using violence means against students can hurt them physically or psychologically and make them hate school and may be escape from it . In addition to that the problem of  private tutoring that make the students do not attend their schools and don not respect their teachers .Besides that classrooms are in very bad condition and the time for each period is not enough to explain the lessons .

                     On the second hand, there are a number of suggested solutions to improve and develop the educational system in Egypt. The ministry of education has a great role in providing training courses for teachers to raise their levels. There should be a stick laws and hard punishment for private tutoring. The teachers also do their best to make the material very easy and interesting by using different methods of teaching aids and modern means of technology.

                    To sum up, education is considered the future of our country .This future would be successful or miserable and this actually depends on education. Hence the education can reflect the progress of our country .so; every one should be armed with education which does not end. Finally, I can say that "education last from birth to grave".

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Outline

** *The educational system in Egypt * * *

                                                                              Q1:What is the importance of the education?

   Q2: What are the advantages of the educational             system in Egypt?

   Q3: What are the disadvantages and problems of the educational system in Egypt?

   Q4: What are the possible solutions to solve this problem?

    Q5: How can we improve and develop our educational system in Egypt?

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Final draft

"Adoption of a child"

                         Is adoption legal or not??? Adoption is a legal process by which a couple takes the responsibility to raise a child who is not biologically related to them as their own. Adoption creates a permanent legal relationship between the adoptive parents and the child. When you adopt a child, the legal rights of the real parents of the child get transferred to you. Additionally, the adopted child has the same rights as any biological child of your own. In short, the child becomes a part of your family. So, adoption is an argumentative topic and there are some people who agree with it whereas others protest against it .In my opinion, adoption is a noble gesture towards society.

                  On one hand, Couples choose to adopt a baby for a variety of reasons. First, people who suffer from genetic diseases. Others who want to adopt a child of different sex as they already have children of the same sex. Also, couples who have only one child, they adopt a second child to complete their family. In addition to that some couples adopt a baby out of genuine love for children whether they have their own children or not. I agree with adoption of a child can bring untold joys and happiness to your family. Also, you can make a big difference to an orphaned child’s life. Moreover the child gets a parent, family, security, love and happiness and it is a noble gesture towards society.

                    On the second hand, some people are against adoption. As they believe that adoption is often considered as banned issue in society. Also, your adopted child may want to know his real parents once he or she grows up.  Besides the child may never reconcile to the fact that he (or she) was left abandoned at some point of time.  Also, there is Fear of how relatives would treat your adopted child .Adoption causes the problem of inheritance.

                    To sum up ,  your decision to adopt a child can indeed be one of the most rewarding experiences in your life. Nevertheless, weigh all the positive and negative aspects before you make a decision—have realistic expectations.

First draft

  

               

                       "  Adoption of a child "

                         Is adoption  legal or not??? Adoption is a legal process by which a couple takes the responsibility to raise a child who is not biologically related to them as their own. Adoption creates a permanent legal relationship between the adoptive parents and the child. When you adopt a child, the legal rights of the real parents of the child get transferred to you. Additionally, the adopted child has the same rights as any biological child of your own. In short, the child becomes a part of your family. So, adoption is an argumentative topic and there  are some people who agree with it whereas others who protest against it .In my opinion , adoption is a noble gesture towards society.

                  On one hand ,Couples choose to adopt a baby for a variety of reasons .first, People who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own. Others who want to adopt  a child  of different sex as they already has children of the same sex. Also ,couple who has only one child ,they adopt a second  child to complete their family. In addition to that there are People who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own.  In addition to that Some couples adopt a baby out of genuine love for children whether they have their own children or not. I  agree with adoption of a child as a adoption  a child can bring untold joys and happiness to your family. Also , You can make a big difference to an orphaned child’s life. Moreover The child gets a parent, family, security, love and happiness and It is a noble gesture towards society.

                    On  the second hand ,some people are against adoption . As  they believe that adoption is often considered as banned  in society. Also, Your adopted child may want to know about real parents once he or she grows up.  Beside that the child may never reconcile to the fact that he or she was left abandoned at some point of time.  Also, there are Fear of how relatives would treat your adopted child .Adoption  causes the problem of inheritance.

                    To sum up ,  Your decision to adopt a child can indeed be one of the most rewarding experiences in your life. Nevertheless, weigh all the positive and negative aspects before you make a decision—have realistic expectations.

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Adoption of a child

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The introduction:

**Adoption is a legal process by which a couple takes the responsibility to raise a child who is not biologically related to them as their own. Adoption creates a permanent legal relationship between the adoptive parents and the child.

**Some people agree with idea of adoption .(I agree with this idea ).

**Others are against the idea of adoption.

Body (1):

-Reasons for supporting the idea of adoption of a child:

a) childless couples.

B) Couples wanting a child of the opposite sex.

c) Single adults who love children.

d) Some couples adopt a baby out of genuine love for children whether they have their own children or not.

e) People who suffer from genetic diseases and choose not to have children of their own.

Body(2):

Reasons for refusing the idea of adoption a child: ّّّّّّ-

A)    Adoption is often considered as a taboo (banned) in society.

B)      Your adopted child may want to know about real parents once he or she grows up.

C)     The child may never reconcile to the fact that he or she was left abandoned at some point of time.

D)    Fear whether society will accept your adopted child.

E)     Fear of how relatives would treat your adopted child.

F)      Troubling doubts as to when or whether to tell your child that he or she was adopted.

The conclusion:

·        Every child needs a family as it is the best place for any child to grow. But some children are unfortunate. They have nobody to give them care and love. This makes them feel abandoned and neglected .S o, I agree  with the idea of adoption a child as it is legal.

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"The last draft "Air pollution

                  Can you imagine life without pollution?? Every one of us needs to breathe fresh and clear air .Unfortunately , air pollution has become a terrible danger which threatens life on earth . Air pollution is an environmental problem that originates from the relation between man and his culture and natural surroundings .It is founded every where as man polluted the world with smoke ,gases ,and chemicals .All human beings need to breathe clean air to live .God creates the environment without any trace of pollution . Therefore, the nature has its own way to get rid of its wastes but when the quantity or the quality of waste materials increase its capacity. There are many causes and deadly effects of air pollution and some suggested  solutions.

                            Air pollution arises from numerous reasons in Egypt . Combustion engine exhaust such as cars ,trucks ,Jet planes , and other combustion engine vehicles cause air pollution .In addition to that factories , office building , and power generating stations burn fossil fuel which also cause air pollution . Another source of air pollution is that petroleum refineries that release hydrocarbons and various particulates . Also, there are pesticides that used to kill indoor and outdoor pests and insecticides that used to kill insects .

                                Air pollution in Egypt has  deadly effects on climate ,property ,and health. First, Air pollution changes our planet's climate . It sometimes causes  global warming to speed  up and sometimes causes global warming to slow down . The result of the increase of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is the so-called "green house effect". The carbon dioxide makes the sun ’ s heat more intensive. Secondly ,air pollution can harm buildings , monuments ,outdoor statues ,and other such structures . Acid rain dissolves stones and can create cracks in buildings .Also, air pollution affects health .It causes coughs,  burning eyes , breathing problems and even death.

                             There are some suggested solutions to solve the problem of air pollution . The public and government should stand side by side to fight the environmental air pollution .Factories aught to move away from inhabited areas .Also, we should reduce using the old, badly maintained vehicles. Government should reduce the numbers of vehicles on roads .In addition to that we should avoid the use of firecrackers. One should plant trees and strict laws should be imposed.

                             To sum up , the problem of air pollution should be ended quickly .We should end this problem quickly. One should take into consideration that the earth is a gift from God.

(Final draft (Air pollution

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

                    Can you imagine life without pollution?? Every one of us needs to breathe fresh and clear air .Unfortunately air pollution has become a terrible danger which threatens life on earth . Air pollution is an environmental problem that originates from the relation between man and his culture and natural surroundings .It is founded every where as a man polluted the world with smoke ,gases ,and chemicals .All human being need to breathe clean air to live .God creates the environment without any trace of pollution . Therefore, the nature has its own way to getting rid of its wastes but when the quantity or the quality of waste materials increase its capacity. We get pollution . There are many causes and deadly effects of air pollution and some suggested  solutions.

                            Air pollution arises from numerous reasons in Egypt . Combustion engine exhaust such as cars ,trucks ,Jet planes , and other combustion engine vehicles cause air pollution .In addition to that factories , office building , and power generating stations burn fossil fuel which also cause air pollution . Another source of air pollution is that petroleum refineries that release hydrocarbons and various particulates . Also, there are pesticides that used to kill indoor and outdoor pests and insecticides that used to kill insects . Some times ,farmers use fertilizers which used to help plants to grow causes air pollution .

                                Air pollution in Egypt has  a deadly effects on climate ,property ,and health. First, Air pollution changes our planet climate . It sometimes causes  global warming to speed  up and sometimes causes global warming to slow down . The result of the increase of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is the so-called "green house effect". The carbon dioxide makes the sun ’heat more intense. Secondly ,air pollution can harm buildings , monuments ,outdoor statues ,and other such structures .The chemicals in air pollution eat away at materials such as sandstone ,limestone , motor  , and different metals. Acid rain dissolves stones and can create cracks in buildings .Also, air pollution ’effect on health .It causes coughs,  burning eyes , breathing problems and even death.

                             There are some suggested solutions to solve the problem of air pollution . The public and government should stand side by side to fight the environmental air pollution .Factories aught to moved away from inhabited areas .Also, we should reduce using the old, badly maintained vehicles. Government should reduce the numbers of vehicles on roads .In addition to that we should avoid the use of firecrackers. One should plant trees and strict laws should be imposed.

                             To sum up , the problem of air pollution should be ended quickly .Unless we use our world wisely ,our children will not have a world to live on. One should take into consideration that the earth is a gift from God.

Essay

"Air pollution"

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                            There is no doubt that air pollution has become a terrible danger which threatens life on earth . Air pollution is an environmental problem that originates from the relation between man and his culture and natural surroundings .It is founded every where as a man polluted the world with smoke ,gases ,and chemicals .All human being need to breathe clean air to live . God creates the environment without any trace of pollution . Therefore, the nature has its own way to getting rid of its wastes but when the quantity or the quality of waste materials surpasses its capacity. We get pollution . There are many causes and deadly effects of air pollution and some suggested  solutions.

                            On one hand ,there are a great number of pollutants   that causes air pollution in Egypt . combustion engine exhaust such as cars ,trucks ,Jet planes , and other combustion engine vehicles cause air pollution .In addition to that factories , office building , and power generating stations burn fossil fuel which also cause air pollution . Another source of air pollution is that petroleum refineries that release hydrocarbons and various particulates . Also, there are pesticides that used to kill indoor and outdoor pests and insecticides that used to kill insects . Some times ,farmers use fertilizers which used to help plants to grow causes air pollution .

                               On the second hand , air pollution in Egypt has  a dangerous effect on climate. Air pollution changes our planet climate . It sometimes causes  global warming to speed  up and sometimes causes global warming to slow down . The result of the increase of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is the so-called "green house effect". The carbon dioxide makes the sun ’heat more intense. Another effect of air pollution is on property .Air pollution can harm buildings , monuments ,outdoor statues ,and other such structures .The chemicals in air pollution eat away at materials such as sandstone ,limestone , motar, and different metals. Acid rain dissolves stones and can create cracks in buildings .Also, air pollution ’effect on health .It causes coughs,  burning eyes , breathing problems and even death.

                             There are some suggested solutions to solve the problem of air pollution . The public and government should stand side by side to fight the environmental air pollution .Factories aught to moved away from inhabited areas .Also, we should reduce using the old, badly maintained vehicles. Government should reduce the numbers of vehicles on roads .In addition to that we should avoid the use of firecrackers. One should plant trees and strict laws should be imposed.

                             Finally, the problem of air pollution should be ended quickly .Unless we use our world wisely ,our children will not have a world to live on. One should take into consideration that the earth is a gift from God.

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Air pollution

First draft * ** *

Air pollution in Egypt.

                   

 Introduction:*

Meaning of air pollution.-

-Importance of air in our life.

Causes of air pollution (body 1)- *

a-Combustion engine exhaust .

b-Factories fumes.

c-Petroleum refineries .

d-Pesticides.

e-Radioactive fallout.

f-Fertilizers.

*Effects of air pollution(body 2):

a-air pollution 's effects on climate .

b-air pollution's effects on property .

c- air pollution 's effects on human health .

*Suggested solution for air pollution :(body 3)-

a-Reducing the number  of vehicle on the already congested roads .

b-Using minimum amount of natural gas.

c-avoiding the use of firecracker.

d-planting large numbers of trees.

e-reducing waste.

f-trying to restrict population growth.

g-imposing strict laws and penalties.

Conclusion :-**

 Finally, the problem associated with air pollution has the capabilities to disrupt life on our planet to a great extent.